Friday, December 19, 2008

Gift of Life


While a sea has its waves and a river has its fall,

There was a small pond of water, that was always at stall.

Sometimes the pond wondered, what it would be like,

To move like a river, and have sea like tides.

Dream it would often, as an ocean so deep,

And as water abound, moving down the steep.

One fine evening, as the sun set in the skies,

Near the pond came a girl, with two beautiful eyes.

Her eyes looked so pure, free from any guise,

Every time the pond averted, they called for a reprise.

Her eyes reflected a journey, no river could describe,

Leave aside ocean, they were as deep as the skies.

Forever the pond had wished, to move and sway and tide,

All it wanted now was to sit there all its life.

The pond though knew in heart, such moments often cease,

The eyes, as if heard that, and a tear they released.

A tear with her heart, encased in a tiny whit,

A tear meant for the pond, for it to be kept as a gift.

It tasted sure like ocean, and was as pure as the shrine,

With the silence of a river, it was pond’s gift of all times.

It became a part of the pond, within it as it pervade,

It fulfilled all the wishes, pond had ever made.

The tear gave the pond, a new meaning to its life,

Remembered the pond forever, those ‘beautiful eyes’.

12 comments:

Vaga Bond said...

Can there be anything more beautiful than your thoughts ??

Unknown said...

awesome buddy.....u rock...;)

riti said...

beautiful :)

Vijay Kumar Dixit said...

maa kassamm !! elegance in simplicity ...... vintage Kabeer :)

Puspesh said...

abe tu professional ban ja ....
and thoda aur likh na ... blogosphere mein padhne ko kuch milega tab ... :)

vikram singh said...

good...good...good....Kabir !!!

Kabeer said...

Thanks a lot all for going thru the poem and your comments :)

Sree said...

PB... approaching the elegance of a namesake of years ago :)

Anonymous said...

hehehe .. no comments again ...

Anonymous said...

Thy words have I always praised

Times they have a salty water raised

So beautiful they are

So simple and full of grace

I know not how to commend

Beyond words I say

Read these lines and

There in my hands

A drop of salty water lay.

Kabeer said...

@sree

I almost had forgotten PB :).. so nice of you to say that

@kalu

Thanks

@Anonymous

These lines are so nice, every word is so highly valued. As I had said earlier, you must blog :). Thanks a lot for such nice lines

SAM said...

wow! too gud Kabeer :)